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Detailed Results
Admin aljl Tue Dec 06, 2011 12:53 pm
01 - hackrz vs kyo
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rythme ( beat ) : 2/3
You are on the beat, all steps are in bass.. now, try to play with the music
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variéty : 2/3
Hum.. you have nice style and some tricks, but in your movie, you repeat a lot some tricks.. try to don't repeat next time ^^
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originality : 0/2
only jump session, not more, not effects.. try to make more original movie next time
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balance : 2/3
You don't fall, always good but try to keep more risk, your tricks don't need balance
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respect of time of deadline : 1/1
movie posted the 21 november =) very nice
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style : 2/3
you have a nice style, but not rare, learn more special tricks for get your own style
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endurance / agressivity : 2,5/3
you remain constant from beginning to end, but I give you -0,5 because of the spin of the end, not enough agressiv
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technique : 1/2
you have nice tricks, really, but try to get harder tricks, they are basic
TOTAL : 12,5/20
You are very clean *_* you are on beat, you know your tricks and i see this
But.. it still basic.. your tricks are not very hard to do, and you haven't your own style, it's like scot etc...
If you want MORE :
- play with the music
- learn harder tricks
- don't repeat some tricks like ( 0,21 - 0,24 - 0,28 - 0,36 - 0,38 )
- try to mix some dance, get new tricks
01 - kyo vs hackrz
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rythme ( beat ) : 2/3
You are on the beat, all steps are in bass.. now, try to play with the music
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variéty : 1/3
Hum.. you haven't enough tricks for go in 1/8final.. learn more tricks
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originality : 1/2
your intro is nice, good job
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balance : 2/3
You don't fall, always good but try to keep more risk, your tricks don't need balance
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respect of time of deadline : 1/1
movie posted the 04 december.. but you don't post after 4 dec so it's ok..
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style : 1/3
you begin to get a style, get more tricks for create your style
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endurance / agressivity : 1/3
you are agressiv in your basic hardjump' step, but you lost this agressivity when you do some tricks =s
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technique : 1/2
you have tricks, but get MORE tricks and HARDER tricks ^^
TOTAL : 10/20
you are nice, but you haven't enough tricks for 1/8final :s
try to learn more and create your own style
If you want MORE :
- play with the music
- learn more AND harder tricks
- don't repeat some tricks like ( 0,58 - 1,02 - 1,06 - 1,11 - 1,16 )
- try to mix some dance, get new tricks
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02 - funnybearz vs tezkoh
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rythme ( beat ) : 2/3
You are often in beat with basic steps ( 0,48 ) and some turn, and you play with the music at begin *_*
but we can't really see the beat when you turn ( begin until 0,48 ) because you only turn :s
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variéty : 2,5/3
only ONE hardjump basic, lot of tricks ( turn-tricks ) and you almost don't repeat tricks.. really nice
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originality : 1/2
your intro is nice and you have fair play, good job
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balance : 2/3
You don't fall, always good but try to keep more risk, your tricks don't need balance
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respect of time of deadline : 1/1
movie posted the 03 december, nice
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style : 1/3
you begin to get a style, get more tricks for create your style, i can't say that you have an own style, it's rather banal
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endurance / agressivity : 2/3
you are agressiv in your basic hardjump' step, and in your turn/wheel, but try to be more until the end
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technique : 1/2
you have tricks, but HARDER tricks ^^
TOTAL : 12,5/20
you are nice, and clean, but you need harder tricks for 1/8final
you have lot of combos ( 0,32-0,48 ) but try to change the rotation's direction when you turn
( left to right.. stop.. right to left..etc )
and try to create your own style with this
If you want MORE :
- do lot of combos, but separate them by basic hardjump - ownstyle step
- learn harder tricks
- try to mix some dance, get new tricks like your begin
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02 -tezkoh vs funnybearz
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rythme ( beat ) : 3/3
You are on the beat, your begin is GG and you play with the music o_o very nice!
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variéty : 2/3
you have lot of tricks, nice
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originality : 1,5/2
your "funnybearz" is very GG , because it's your versus, and nice mix
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balance : 2/3
You don't fall, always good but try to keep more risk, your tricks don't need balance
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respect of time of deadline : 1/1
movie posted the 03 december..
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style : 1/3
you begin to get a style, get more tricks for create your style and be FASTER and STRONGER
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endurance / agressivity : 0/3
i don't see motivation, agressivity =/
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technique : 1,5/2
nice tricks, i see some new tricks, and your shuffle trick is welcome
TOTAL : 12/20
you have some goods things ( beat, originality,
If you want MORE :
- BE MORE AGRESSIV, you haven't motivation? o_o
- be cleaner in your tricks, you don't do them perfectly
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03 - juvix vs revol
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rythme ( beat ) : 2/3
You are in beat, it's nice, but try to play with the music when music have effect ( 0,25 - 0,38 )
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variéty : 1/3
you almost don"t repeat tricks, but you haven't lot of tricks :s
try to learn more tricks for the next stage
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originality : 0/2
not intro, only jump session, not effect, nothing, it's sad =/
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balance : 3/3
You don't fall, always good and you take a risk with your begin's tricks nice
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respect of time of deadline : 1/1
movie posted the 04 december..
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style : 1/3
you begin to get a style, get more tricks for create your style, i can't say that you have an own style, it's rather banal too
use your favorite special tricks like your begin for get a style
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endurance / agressivity : 2/3
you are agressiv and i can see motivation, it's nice but you can be more agressiv
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technique : 1/2
you have tricks and special tricks ( begin of the movie ) but the rest is basic
TOTAL : 11/20
you are nice, and sometimes clean, but you need harder tricks for 1/8final..
your begin is cool, but if you do this when the music has effect, it can be cool
you have few combos.. create more ^^
and try to create your own style with this
If you want MORE :
- do lot of combos,
- learn harder tricks
- try to mix some dance, get new tricks like your begin
- play with the music
- get a new style
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Revol : NO MOVIE / Disqualified
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Light vs Cursebird
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rythme ( beat ) : 2,5/3
you are on beat, and sometimes you play with the music ( begin / 0,52 )
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variéty : 2/3
you have some tricks, but you repeat tricks ( 0,42 / 0,47 / 0,49 / 1,01 ) and other tricks.
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originality : 1/2
you have little intro with effect, nice
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balance : 2/3
you don't lost balance, but you haven't difficult tricks who need balance ( spin etc.. )
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respect of time of deadline : 1/1
movie posted the 04 december..
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style : 1/3
it's banal, try to move more, take more place and learn mor tricks
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endurance / agressivity : 1/3
not agressiv at all, or maybe in basic step.. but it's not enough =/
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technique : 1/2
you have tricks, but it's very easy to do them =/
TOTAL : 11,5/20
one thing... learn to read, your versus is CURSEBIRD, not CURDBIRD -_-"
it's not cool to don't read your versus's name, and it's very cool, judges can't search the battle on youtube because of your titel..
for your jump, it's nice, you have nice tricks, but you show that you aren't motivate.. you can do better
If you want MORE :
- learn more tricks, and HARDER tricks
- take more place with tricks
- be more agressiv or motivate, when i listen the music, i find your jump slow =/
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Cursebird: NO MOVIE / Disqualified
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05 - Arkayn vs Jelle
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rythme ( beat ) : 2/3
you are on beat, and sometimes you play with the music ( begin / 0,52 )
but with this music, you can do better
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variéty : 2/3
you have lot of differents tricks and you almost don't repeat combos and tricks..
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originality : 1/2
you have little intro with effect, nice
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balance : 2/3
you don't lost balance, but you haven't difficult tricks who need balance ( spin etc.. )
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respect of time of deadline : 1/1
movie posted the 04 december..
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style : 2/3
it's not banal, you take space for jump and you have advanced tricks ( like begin etc.. ) but it's not a new style
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endurance / agressivity : 1,5/3
you are constant, agressiv until the end, nice but some tricks are not ( 0,36.. )
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technique : 1/2
you have advanced tricks, and your begin is nice but you can learn more advanced tricks
TOTAL : 12,5/20
globaly nice, i like it but be just more clean for have better...
and one part, you are maybe lucky that Jelle do bad movie for this round..
so proove me that you deserves your place in 1/8..
If you want MORE :
- learn HARDER tricks
- be more clean in your style and create your own style
- play with music
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05 - Jelle vs Arkayn
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rythme ( beat ) : 1/3
you are on beat.. sometimes o_o but... lot of tricks are off beat :s
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variéty : 2/3
you have some tricks, but you repeat looooot of tricks =/
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originality : 1/2
you have little intro ( ps : happy birthday to rudy nice
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balance : 1/3
you lost your balance in your turn ( 0,38 / 0,48 )
i give you 1 because of your last tricks, you take risk
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respect of time of deadline : 1/1
movie posted the 28 november..
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style : 1/3
it's not banal, you have your style, but with this view.. we can't see, it's ugly and dirty =/
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endurance / agressivity : 2/3
you are agressiv in 3/4 of your jump, it's good
( but sometimes like 0,53 etc.., you lost the endurance )
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technique : 2/2
you have nice tricks, like the begin , or 0,55 ..etc
TOTAL : 11/20
one word : OMG! you were one of my favorite jumper, but.. it's a league, with rate, and for THIS round, and THIS movie, you deserves 11..
you are offbeat, and you aren't clean at all.. BUT you take some risk with difficults tricks, it's GOOD
if you success to do this, without fall, with agressiv and on beat, you can have 14-15/20..
you can do better, like 1/16 !
If you want MORE :
- you know that you need to do for have more, i wrote this up
- change this view o_o we can't really see your tricks --"
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06 - Nao vs Nitros
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rythme ( beat ) : 3/3
you are on beat.. and you play with the music : perfect
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variéty : 2/3
you have some tricks, you almost don't repeat tricks and you don't use basic hardjump : nice
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originality : 1/2
you have little intro and some effect in your jump movie
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balance : 2/3
this spin is : amazing at begin, and you have nice balance <3
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respect of time of deadline : 0/1
movie posted the 05 december..
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style : 3/3
it's not banal at all, you have your own style <3
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endurance / agressivity : 2/3
you are agressiv in 3/4 of your jump, it's good
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technique : 2/2
you have nice tricks, nice begin, nice end.. perfect
TOTAL : 15/20
one word : OMG! you were one of my favorite jumper too.. your movie is amazing, and.. you deserves your fame
you mark the jumpstyle's world with your style, good luck for this round, because your versus is maybe the most hard of the round
If you want MORE :
- try to be more original
- respect the deadline ( you have 1 week for make a movie, some people post movie the day just after the results )
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06 - Nitros vs Nao
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rythme ( beat ) : 3/3
you are on beat.. you finish when the music finish, you play with the music.. very nice!
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variéty : 2,5/3
you have so amazing combos, differents tricks and you repeat maybe one time, but no more.. amazing!
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originality : 1/2
you have little intro with effect, it's nice and good fair play ( "friendly battle" )
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balance : 2/3
you don't lost the balance, you take a risk ( 0,42 combo when you jump in the air ) and the spin at begin
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respect of time of deadline : 1/1
movie posted the 03 december..
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style : 3/3
it's your style, you don't copy it, it's very not a "spanish style", you are different, you create your OWN STYLE =D
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endurance / agressivity : 2/3
you are agressiv in 3/4 of your jump too, and it's very clean
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technique : 2/2
you have nice tricks, nice spin, nice combos, it's very good
TOTAL : 16,5/20
one word : OMG! you were one of my favorite jumper too.. i'm sick to think that you are VERSUS nao...
2 amazings jumpers in the same versus.. FUUU =/
if you loose : good luck for the rest and very thx for participate
if you win : good luck for the 1/8 and do better movie
If you want MORE :
- try to be more original
- get amazing hard tricks for get more :p
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07 - Svit vs Lyk4n
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rythme ( beat ) : 3/3
you are on beat.. and you play with the music ( 0,28 ) etc.. ^^
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variéty : 2/3
you have some tricks, you almost don't repeat tricks
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originality : 0/2
you just put a solo, no intro, no more, =/
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balance : 2,5/3
this spin are amazing, and you don't fall, very nice
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respect of time of deadline : 1/1
movie posted the 04 december..
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style : 2/3
it's banal, i see lot of russian jumpers in your jump.. try to get your style
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endurance / agressivity : 2/3
you are agressiv in 3/4 of your jump, it's good
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technique : 1/2
you have nice tricks, nice wheels and spin, but it's already see in other ALJL jumpers
TOTAL : 13,5/20
you are clean, you understand the rules of the ALJL ( rythm, balanc etc.. ) but it's not amazing, you deserves 13,5 ^^
try to use new solo, not old ^^
and continu like this, i saw your movie 5 times
If you want MORE :
- try to be more original
- learn more advanced tricks ^^
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07 -Lyk4n vs Svit
Lyk4n : NO MOVIE / Disqualified
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08 - imprezza vs kuker
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rythme ( beat ) : 2/3
you are on beat.. but try to play with the music ^^
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variéty : 2/3
you have some tricks, but you repeat tricks =/
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originality : 1/2
nice AE intro, you put kuker in the intro, nice fair play
but you lost 1/2 because jump in your house... =/
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balance : 2/3
nice balance, but you don't take any risk =/
ps: the spin become good
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respect of time of deadline : 1/1
movie posted the 26 november..
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style : 1/3
it's banal, i see lot of jumpers like this... try to get your tricks for get your style
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endurance / agressivity : 1/3
maybe lack of motivation? it's seem slow, try to hurt the floor =/
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technique : 1/2
you have nice tricks, nice wheels and spin, but it's already see in other ALJL jumpers
TOTAL : 11/20
it's sure, you haven't the same level that Kuker.. but you can become fine if you continu to train
you increase your level, and please... jump out of house --' lol
If you want MORE :
- jump out of house
- learn more advanced tricks ^^
- be HARDER when you jump =/
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08 -kuker vs imprezza
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rythme ( beat ) : 2,5/3
you are on beat for your tricks, basic and you play with the music ( finish at end / 0,44 )
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variéty : 3/3
you have lot of tricks, you almost don't repeat tricks and this end.. NEVER saw this in jumpstyle's world <3
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originality : 1/2
you have nice intro, and effect.. i like it
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balance : 2,5/3
you don't fall, and you take some risk with jump, kicks, and final trick
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respect of time of deadline : 1/1
movie posted the 26 november..
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style : 3/3
it's not banal at all! you create a new style, i very like this, it's clean and fluid... <3
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endurance / agressivity : 2/3
you still agressiv, until the end.. very respect
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technique : 2/2
you have nice tricks, nice wheels and spin, but it's already see in other ALJL jumpers
TOTAL : 17/20
OMG ! this movie is very better than 1/16 o_o you are almost perfect for ALJL's criteria o_o
you understand what a league ask to jumpers... what else? you deserve your fame in jumpstyle's world =)
If you want MORE :
- try to be more original in the edit of your movie ( little story ( love, friend etc.. )
- maybe time to learn spin?
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09 - Aldriic vs Benny aka
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rythme ( beat ) : 2/3
you are on beat for your tricks, basic but try to play with the music
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variéty : 2,5/3
you have lot of tricks, you almost don't repeat tricks and you jump 24seconds, but you use lot of differents tricks
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originality : 2/2
you have nice intro, effects and.. 1/16 and 1/8 are ONE story, true? very original, continu like this
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balance : 2/3
you don't fall, and you use hard tricks who need balance sometimes
BUT you almost fall at your kick ( 1,23 ) so.. -1
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respect of time of deadline : 1/1
movie posted the 30 november..
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style : 3/3
it's not banal, it's clean and fluid, maybe a new style
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endurance / agressivity : 2,5/3
you still agressiv, until the end.. nice man
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technique : 2/2
you have nice tricks, nice wheels and your own tricks ( 1,15 - 1,30 etc.. )
TOTAL : 17/20
Very nice man! One part, i like your little story, it's the first time that i see this in a league
And you have your own style, you don't copy other jumpers, you are clean.. very nice, continu like this!
You can increase your jumpstyle's level, if you have 17/20, it's because you have 2/2 in originality, so..
try to get 17 only with jumpstyle
If you want MORE :
- take more risk with balance without fall
- maybe time to learn spin?
- play with music
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09 - Benny aka VS Aldriic
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rythme ( beat ) : 2/3
you are on beat for your tricks, very nice
but you try to play with the music sometimes ( like 0,45 ) and you fail =/
( if you success this combo, it can be cool )
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variéty : 2/3
you have lot of tricks, you almost don't repeat tricks, it's good ^^
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originality : 1/2
you have effect..
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balance : 2/3
you don't fall, but you don't take risk
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respect of time of deadline : 1/1
movie posted the 02 december..
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style : 2/3
it's banal, i see lot of russian jumpers in your jumpstyle... try to be different ^^
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endurance / agressivity : 1/3
you are agressiv at begin.. but you lost in at the middle =/ train your cardio ^^
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technique : 1/2
you have nice tricks, and nice basics, but it's not enough, try harder tricks for have more ^^
TOTAL : 12/20
this is nice, i like see this movie, really
but try to train your agressivity, your style and the tricks at 0,45 <3
If you want MORE :
- try to be more original in the edit of your movie
- get better tricks and harder tricks
- try to be constant in your endurance when you jump
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10 - Splyke vs BL4Z3R
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rythme ( beat ) : 2/3
you are on beat for your tricks but try to play with the music
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variéty : 2/3
you have lot of tricks, but try to repeat less your tricks ^^
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originality : 0/2
you havent' intro, effect, nothing =/
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balance : 2/3
you don't fall, but you don't use tricks who very need balance
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respect of time of deadline : 1/1
movie posted the 04 december..
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style : 2/3
it's not banal, but it's like russian jumpstyle.. try to get your tricks, and your style
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endurance / agressivity : 2/3
you still agressiv, until the end.. nice man
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technique : 1/2
you have nice tricks, nice wheels but try to get your own sticks
TOTAL : 12/20
Nice, you are very clean and fluid
but it's already see.. try to get your own style, play with music.. etc for have more
If you want MORE :
- take more risk with balance without fall
- get your own style
- play with music
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BL4Z3R - NO MOVIE / Disqualified
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he'en vs r3volution
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rythme ( beat ) : 2/3
you are on beat for your tricks and you play with the music
but you finish efore the music at the end =/
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variéty : 3/3
you have lot of tricks, you don't repeat your combos/tricks.. very nice!
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originality : 1/2
you havent' intro, effect,
but you add "ownstyle" and "tekstyle", and your little logo pokemon is funny
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balance : 2/3
you don't fall, and you use only one tricks need balance ( 0,43, Mickael Jackson power! XD )
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respect of time of deadline : 1/1
movie posted the 04 december..
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style : 3/3
it's not banal, you have your own style mix tekstyle and ownstyle is nice even if you are not clean for all
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endurance / agressivity : 1,5/3
you are agressiv for some tricks, but not all
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technique : 2/2
you have nice tricks, ownstyle and tekstyle nice idea
TOTAL : 15,5/20
I... don't understand "revolution, good luck for your surgery" ? and your titel.. it's r3voluTION, not ITON ^^'
and try to shut your mouth when you say : 'i lose because judges are friend...etc"
my goal is not to suck my friends, every judges in EVERY leagues have friends, no? -_-'
it's very childish to say this, and very very stupid to say this BEFORE results..
For the jump, it's good, just be more clean in your jump, you aren't fluid at all
Continu to be original like this, you have your style
If you want MORE :
- take more risk with balance
- be more clean and fluid
- don't insults league of judges -_-' it's stupid
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R3volution : NO MOVIE / DIsqualified
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12 - Energy'zMusic VS Kip
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rythme ( beat ) : 2/3
you are on beat for your tricks but you don't play with the music :s
but you finish before the music at the end =/
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variéty : 1/3
you have some tricks, but not enough for have 2/3
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originality : 1/2
you have an intro, effect
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balance : 2/3
you don't fall, look your arms.. it's not easy for you?
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respect of time of deadline : 1/1
movie posted the 04 december..
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style : 1/3
it's banal, try to get your own style
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endurance / agressivity : 1/3
you are not agressiv globaly, only for some tricks maybe =/
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technique : 1/2
you have nice tricks, but try to learn advanced tricks ^^
TOTAL : 10/20
Not bad, i like this, continu to train for become better
If you want MORE :
- try to use your arms, they must be a part of you
- learn better tricks and harder tricks ^^
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Kip vs Energy'zMusic
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rythme ( beat ) : 2/3
you are on beat for your tricks but you don't play with the music :s
and the music finish before you at the end ^^'
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variéty : 3/3
very nice lot of tricks, don't repeat them.. very nice
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originality : 1/2
you have an intro
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balance : 2/3
you don't fall, but you don't take risk
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respect of time of deadline : 1/1
movie posted the 04 december..
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style : 2,5/3
it's not banal, but it's not amazing.. no in the middle : 2,5/3
try to have one special tricks from you, *_*
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endurance / agressivity : 3/3
you are agressiv until the end, very cool :p
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technique : 1/2
you have nice tricks, but it's globaly basic.. try to get 2 or 3 special tricks
TOTAL : 15,5/20
Not bad at all! very nice, it's very better than 1/16, you show a good level
you haven't a own style, but you can get it :p
If you want MORE :
- get better camera.. because your quality sucks ^^' lol
- learn one or 2 amazing tricks for get your own style
try to be different that other famous jumpers
- time to learn spin?
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13 - Kaay.Ke vs Massiver
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rythme ( beat ) : 3/3
you are on beat for your tricks and you play with the music ( 1:03 to 1:07 ) good job
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variéty : 2/3
you have lot of tricks, you almost don't repeat them.
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originality : 1/2
you have an intro =)
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balance : 2/3
you don't fall, but you don't take risk
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respect of time of deadline : 1/1
movie posted the 27 november..
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style : 2/3
it's not banal, but it's not a new style.. get special tricks ( like your slide at 1:02 )
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endurance / agressivity : 1,5/3
you are in the middle.. not agressiv, but not soft..
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technique : 2/2
you have nice tricks, and special trick like the slide 1:02
TOTAL : 14,5/20
Hey nice man i like this movie, you deserve this rate
If you want MORE :
- learn one or 2 amazing tricks for get your own style
- time to learn spin?
- be more original in your movie
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Massiver : NO MOVIE / Disqualified
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14 - Free vs VictorH
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rythme ( beat ) : 2/3
you are on beat for your tricks but you don't play with the music =/
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variéty : 2/3
you have some tricks, but try to do most ^^
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originality : 1/2
you have a intro
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balance : 2/3
you don't fall, but you don't take risk =/
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respect of time of deadline : 1/1
movie posted the 28 november..
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style : 2/3
it's good but it's not a new style, try to get this with your own tricks
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endurance / agressivity : 2/3
nice, you are globaly agressiv, try to be until the end ^^
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technique : 1/2
you have nice tricks, but maybe need harder tricks to do
TOTAL : 13/20
Nice man, i like your movie, just try to get your style and please?? change this view o_o
If you want MORE :
- change the view when you jump, judge can't really see your moves
- be more original in your movie
- play with music
- get harder tricks
- get your own style
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VictorH vs Free
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rythme ( beat ) : 2/3
you are on beat for your tricks but you don't play with the music =/
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variéty : 3/3
you have lot of tricks, you don't repeat them.
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originality : 1/2
you have no intro, no effect, nothing
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balance : 2/3
you don't fall, but you don't take risk =/
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respect of time of deadline : 1/1
movie posted the 04 december..
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style : 3/3
it's good you have your own style, i really like this, your tricks, your style
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endurance / agressivity : 2/3
it's clean, but i don't see agressivity.. maybe youtube's bug.. your movie looks like slowed
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technique : 2/2
you have nice tricks, and hard tricks that other don't do good
TOTAL : 16/20
Very nice man!
I really like your style, it's always nice to see this! Amazing really!
If you want MORE :
- time to learn spin?
- be more original in your movie
- play with music
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15 - Focus vs NazZziK
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rythme ( beat ) : 2/3
you are on beat for your tricks but you don't play at all with the music =/
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variéty : 3/3
you have a lot of tricks, very nice <3
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originality : 1/2
you have a nice intro, but your house.. i very like 1/16 because of club, but here.. =/
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balance : 2,5/3
you don't fall, but you don't take risk =/ ( only the tricks at begin, but it's not enough for give you 3/3 )
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respect of time of deadline : 1/1
movie posted the 04 december..
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style : 3/3
it's good you have a god style, your style
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endurance / agressivity : 2,5/3
nice, you are globaly agressiv
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technique : 2/2
you have nice tricks, and nice begin.. continu
TOTAL : 17/20
Nice man, you are.. one amazing jumper in this league o_o
even if i don't like the place and the music, your jump is so amazing that i can't stop to watch this
If you want MORE :
- jump out of house ^^'
- be more original in your movie
- play with music
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15 - NazZziK vs Focus
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rythme ( beat ) : 3/3
you are on beat for your tricks and you play with the music ( 1:00 ) etc..
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variéty : 2,5/3
you have LOT of tricks, but the trap with long session is that sometimes, you repeat tricks :s
but it's not really important, you deserve point for risk
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originality : 1/2
you have an intro, nice
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balance : 2/3
you don't fall, but you don't take risk =/
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respect of time of deadline : 1/1
movie posted the 03 december..
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style : 2/3
it's good but it's not a new style, when i see your movie, i guess that you are russian? =/
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endurance / agressivity : 2/3
nice, you are globaly agressiv, try to be until the end ^^
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technique : 1/2
you have nice tricks, but maybe need harder tricks to do
TOTAL : 14,5/20
Nice man, it's good, but try to lost the russian style, don't be a similar copy of famous jumpers =/
you have nice tricks that i don't see in ALJL jumpers, try to do something with this
If you want MORE :
- be more original in your movie
- get your own style
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16 - nutcase vs gracee
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rythme ( beat ) : 2/3
you are in beat, but you don't use the music =/
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variéty : 2/3
some tricks, but not enough for get more :s
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originality : 1/2
one intro ( but try to get better if you pass.. --' )
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balance : 1,5/3
you don't fall, but at your spin in the end, you almost? ^^'
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respect of time of deadline : 1/1
movie posted the 04 december..
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style : 2/3
it's not a new style, but i never saw this i think, try to get better skills for get a own style
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endurance / agressivity : 2/3
nice agressivity, continu
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technique : 1/2
nice tricks, but it's basic, learn more tricks and better tricks ^^
TOTAL : 12/20
it's nice globaly
even if gracee don't post a movie, you still have a nice rate for unknow jumper ( 12/20 )
continu like this for 1/8 final
If you want MORE :
- get harder tricks
- try to be more fluid
- play with music
- be more original in your clip
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Gracee : NO MOVIE / Disqualified
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rythme ( beat ) : 2/3
You are on the beat, all steps are in bass.. now, try to play with the music
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variéty : 2/3
Hum.. you have nice style and some tricks, but in your movie, you repeat a lot some tricks.. try to don't repeat next time ^^
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originality : 0/2
only jump session, not more, not effects.. try to make more original movie next time
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balance : 2/3
You don't fall, always good but try to keep more risk, your tricks don't need balance
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respect of time of deadline : 1/1
movie posted the 21 november =) very nice
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style : 2/3
you have a nice style, but not rare, learn more special tricks for get your own style
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endurance / agressivity : 2,5/3
you remain constant from beginning to end, but I give you -0,5 because of the spin of the end, not enough agressiv
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technique : 1/2
you have nice tricks, really, but try to get harder tricks, they are basic
TOTAL : 12,5/20
You are very clean *_* you are on beat, you know your tricks and i see this
But.. it still basic.. your tricks are not very hard to do, and you haven't your own style, it's like scot etc...
If you want MORE :
- play with the music
- learn harder tricks
- don't repeat some tricks like ( 0,21 - 0,24 - 0,28 - 0,36 - 0,38 )
- try to mix some dance, get new tricks
01 - kyo vs hackrz
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rythme ( beat ) : 2/3
You are on the beat, all steps are in bass.. now, try to play with the music
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variéty : 1/3
Hum.. you haven't enough tricks for go in 1/8final.. learn more tricks
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originality : 1/2
your intro is nice, good job
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balance : 2/3
You don't fall, always good but try to keep more risk, your tricks don't need balance
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respect of time of deadline : 1/1
movie posted the 04 december.. but you don't post after 4 dec so it's ok..
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style : 1/3
you begin to get a style, get more tricks for create your style
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endurance / agressivity : 1/3
you are agressiv in your basic hardjump' step, but you lost this agressivity when you do some tricks =s
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technique : 1/2
you have tricks, but get MORE tricks and HARDER tricks ^^
TOTAL : 10/20
you are nice, but you haven't enough tricks for 1/8final :s
try to learn more and create your own style
If you want MORE :
- play with the music
- learn more AND harder tricks
- don't repeat some tricks like ( 0,58 - 1,02 - 1,06 - 1,11 - 1,16 )
- try to mix some dance, get new tricks
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02 - funnybearz vs tezkoh
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rythme ( beat ) : 2/3
You are often in beat with basic steps ( 0,48 ) and some turn, and you play with the music at begin *_*
but we can't really see the beat when you turn ( begin until 0,48 ) because you only turn :s
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variéty : 2,5/3
only ONE hardjump basic, lot of tricks ( turn-tricks ) and you almost don't repeat tricks.. really nice
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originality : 1/2
your intro is nice and you have fair play, good job
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balance : 2/3
You don't fall, always good but try to keep more risk, your tricks don't need balance
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respect of time of deadline : 1/1
movie posted the 03 december, nice
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style : 1/3
you begin to get a style, get more tricks for create your style, i can't say that you have an own style, it's rather banal
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endurance / agressivity : 2/3
you are agressiv in your basic hardjump' step, and in your turn/wheel, but try to be more until the end
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technique : 1/2
you have tricks, but HARDER tricks ^^
TOTAL : 12,5/20
you are nice, and clean, but you need harder tricks for 1/8final
you have lot of combos ( 0,32-0,48 ) but try to change the rotation's direction when you turn
( left to right.. stop.. right to left..etc )
and try to create your own style with this
If you want MORE :
- do lot of combos, but separate them by basic hardjump - ownstyle step
- learn harder tricks
- try to mix some dance, get new tricks like your begin
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02 -tezkoh vs funnybearz
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rythme ( beat ) : 3/3
You are on the beat, your begin is GG and you play with the music o_o very nice!
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variéty : 2/3
you have lot of tricks, nice
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originality : 1,5/2
your "funnybearz" is very GG , because it's your versus, and nice mix
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balance : 2/3
You don't fall, always good but try to keep more risk, your tricks don't need balance
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respect of time of deadline : 1/1
movie posted the 03 december..
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style : 1/3
you begin to get a style, get more tricks for create your style and be FASTER and STRONGER
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endurance / agressivity : 0/3
i don't see motivation, agressivity =/
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technique : 1,5/2
nice tricks, i see some new tricks, and your shuffle trick is welcome
TOTAL : 12/20
you have some goods things ( beat, originality,
If you want MORE :
- BE MORE AGRESSIV, you haven't motivation? o_o
- be cleaner in your tricks, you don't do them perfectly
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03 - juvix vs revol
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rythme ( beat ) : 2/3
You are in beat, it's nice, but try to play with the music when music have effect ( 0,25 - 0,38 )
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variéty : 1/3
you almost don"t repeat tricks, but you haven't lot of tricks :s
try to learn more tricks for the next stage
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originality : 0/2
not intro, only jump session, not effect, nothing, it's sad =/
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balance : 3/3
You don't fall, always good and you take a risk with your begin's tricks nice
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respect of time of deadline : 1/1
movie posted the 04 december..
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style : 1/3
you begin to get a style, get more tricks for create your style, i can't say that you have an own style, it's rather banal too
use your favorite special tricks like your begin for get a style
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endurance / agressivity : 2/3
you are agressiv and i can see motivation, it's nice but you can be more agressiv
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technique : 1/2
you have tricks and special tricks ( begin of the movie ) but the rest is basic
TOTAL : 11/20
you are nice, and sometimes clean, but you need harder tricks for 1/8final..
your begin is cool, but if you do this when the music has effect, it can be cool
you have few combos.. create more ^^
and try to create your own style with this
If you want MORE :
- do lot of combos,
- learn harder tricks
- try to mix some dance, get new tricks like your begin
- play with the music
- get a new style
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Revol : NO MOVIE / Disqualified
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Light vs Cursebird
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rythme ( beat ) : 2,5/3
you are on beat, and sometimes you play with the music ( begin / 0,52 )
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variéty : 2/3
you have some tricks, but you repeat tricks ( 0,42 / 0,47 / 0,49 / 1,01 ) and other tricks.
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originality : 1/2
you have little intro with effect, nice
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balance : 2/3
you don't lost balance, but you haven't difficult tricks who need balance ( spin etc.. )
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respect of time of deadline : 1/1
movie posted the 04 december..
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style : 1/3
it's banal, try to move more, take more place and learn mor tricks
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endurance / agressivity : 1/3
not agressiv at all, or maybe in basic step.. but it's not enough =/
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technique : 1/2
you have tricks, but it's very easy to do them =/
TOTAL : 11,5/20
one thing... learn to read, your versus is CURSEBIRD, not CURDBIRD -_-"
it's not cool to don't read your versus's name, and it's very cool, judges can't search the battle on youtube because of your titel..
for your jump, it's nice, you have nice tricks, but you show that you aren't motivate.. you can do better
If you want MORE :
- learn more tricks, and HARDER tricks
- take more place with tricks
- be more agressiv or motivate, when i listen the music, i find your jump slow =/
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Cursebird: NO MOVIE / Disqualified
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05 - Arkayn vs Jelle
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rythme ( beat ) : 2/3
you are on beat, and sometimes you play with the music ( begin / 0,52 )
but with this music, you can do better
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variéty : 2/3
you have lot of differents tricks and you almost don't repeat combos and tricks..
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originality : 1/2
you have little intro with effect, nice
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balance : 2/3
you don't lost balance, but you haven't difficult tricks who need balance ( spin etc.. )
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respect of time of deadline : 1/1
movie posted the 04 december..
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style : 2/3
it's not banal, you take space for jump and you have advanced tricks ( like begin etc.. ) but it's not a new style
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endurance / agressivity : 1,5/3
you are constant, agressiv until the end, nice but some tricks are not ( 0,36.. )
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technique : 1/2
you have advanced tricks, and your begin is nice but you can learn more advanced tricks
TOTAL : 12,5/20
globaly nice, i like it but be just more clean for have better...
and one part, you are maybe lucky that Jelle do bad movie for this round..
so proove me that you deserves your place in 1/8..
If you want MORE :
- learn HARDER tricks
- be more clean in your style and create your own style
- play with music
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05 - Jelle vs Arkayn
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rythme ( beat ) : 1/3
you are on beat.. sometimes o_o but... lot of tricks are off beat :s
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variéty : 2/3
you have some tricks, but you repeat looooot of tricks =/
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originality : 1/2
you have little intro ( ps : happy birthday to rudy nice
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balance : 1/3
you lost your balance in your turn ( 0,38 / 0,48 )
i give you 1 because of your last tricks, you take risk
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respect of time of deadline : 1/1
movie posted the 28 november..
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style : 1/3
it's not banal, you have your style, but with this view.. we can't see, it's ugly and dirty =/
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endurance / agressivity : 2/3
you are agressiv in 3/4 of your jump, it's good
( but sometimes like 0,53 etc.., you lost the endurance )
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technique : 2/2
you have nice tricks, like the begin , or 0,55 ..etc
TOTAL : 11/20
one word : OMG! you were one of my favorite jumper, but.. it's a league, with rate, and for THIS round, and THIS movie, you deserves 11..
you are offbeat, and you aren't clean at all.. BUT you take some risk with difficults tricks, it's GOOD
if you success to do this, without fall, with agressiv and on beat, you can have 14-15/20..
you can do better, like 1/16 !
If you want MORE :
- you know that you need to do for have more, i wrote this up
- change this view o_o we can't really see your tricks --"
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06 - Nao vs Nitros
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rythme ( beat ) : 3/3
you are on beat.. and you play with the music : perfect
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variéty : 2/3
you have some tricks, you almost don't repeat tricks and you don't use basic hardjump : nice
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originality : 1/2
you have little intro and some effect in your jump movie
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balance : 2/3
this spin is : amazing at begin, and you have nice balance <3
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respect of time of deadline : 0/1
movie posted the 05 december..
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style : 3/3
it's not banal at all, you have your own style <3
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endurance / agressivity : 2/3
you are agressiv in 3/4 of your jump, it's good
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technique : 2/2
you have nice tricks, nice begin, nice end.. perfect
TOTAL : 15/20
one word : OMG! you were one of my favorite jumper too.. your movie is amazing, and.. you deserves your fame
you mark the jumpstyle's world with your style, good luck for this round, because your versus is maybe the most hard of the round
If you want MORE :
- try to be more original
- respect the deadline ( you have 1 week for make a movie, some people post movie the day just after the results )
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06 - Nitros vs Nao
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rythme ( beat ) : 3/3
you are on beat.. you finish when the music finish, you play with the music.. very nice!
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variéty : 2,5/3
you have so amazing combos, differents tricks and you repeat maybe one time, but no more.. amazing!
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originality : 1/2
you have little intro with effect, it's nice and good fair play ( "friendly battle" )
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balance : 2/3
you don't lost the balance, you take a risk ( 0,42 combo when you jump in the air ) and the spin at begin
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respect of time of deadline : 1/1
movie posted the 03 december..
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style : 3/3
it's your style, you don't copy it, it's very not a "spanish style", you are different, you create your OWN STYLE =D
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endurance / agressivity : 2/3
you are agressiv in 3/4 of your jump too, and it's very clean
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technique : 2/2
you have nice tricks, nice spin, nice combos, it's very good
TOTAL : 16,5/20
one word : OMG! you were one of my favorite jumper too.. i'm sick to think that you are VERSUS nao...
2 amazings jumpers in the same versus.. FUUU =/
if you loose : good luck for the rest and very thx for participate
if you win : good luck for the 1/8 and do better movie
If you want MORE :
- try to be more original
- get amazing hard tricks for get more :p
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07 - Svit vs Lyk4n
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rythme ( beat ) : 3/3
you are on beat.. and you play with the music ( 0,28 ) etc.. ^^
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variéty : 2/3
you have some tricks, you almost don't repeat tricks
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originality : 0/2
you just put a solo, no intro, no more, =/
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balance : 2,5/3
this spin are amazing, and you don't fall, very nice
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respect of time of deadline : 1/1
movie posted the 04 december..
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style : 2/3
it's banal, i see lot of russian jumpers in your jump.. try to get your style
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endurance / agressivity : 2/3
you are agressiv in 3/4 of your jump, it's good
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technique : 1/2
you have nice tricks, nice wheels and spin, but it's already see in other ALJL jumpers
TOTAL : 13,5/20
you are clean, you understand the rules of the ALJL ( rythm, balanc etc.. ) but it's not amazing, you deserves 13,5 ^^
try to use new solo, not old ^^
and continu like this, i saw your movie 5 times
If you want MORE :
- try to be more original
- learn more advanced tricks ^^
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07 -Lyk4n vs Svit
Lyk4n : NO MOVIE / Disqualified
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08 - imprezza vs kuker
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rythme ( beat ) : 2/3
you are on beat.. but try to play with the music ^^
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variéty : 2/3
you have some tricks, but you repeat tricks =/
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originality : 1/2
nice AE intro, you put kuker in the intro, nice fair play
but you lost 1/2 because jump in your house... =/
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balance : 2/3
nice balance, but you don't take any risk =/
ps: the spin become good
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respect of time of deadline : 1/1
movie posted the 26 november..
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style : 1/3
it's banal, i see lot of jumpers like this... try to get your tricks for get your style
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endurance / agressivity : 1/3
maybe lack of motivation? it's seem slow, try to hurt the floor =/
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technique : 1/2
you have nice tricks, nice wheels and spin, but it's already see in other ALJL jumpers
TOTAL : 11/20
it's sure, you haven't the same level that Kuker.. but you can become fine if you continu to train
you increase your level, and please... jump out of house --' lol
If you want MORE :
- jump out of house
- learn more advanced tricks ^^
- be HARDER when you jump =/
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08 -kuker vs imprezza
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rythme ( beat ) : 2,5/3
you are on beat for your tricks, basic and you play with the music ( finish at end / 0,44 )
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variéty : 3/3
you have lot of tricks, you almost don't repeat tricks and this end.. NEVER saw this in jumpstyle's world <3
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originality : 1/2
you have nice intro, and effect.. i like it
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balance : 2,5/3
you don't fall, and you take some risk with jump, kicks, and final trick
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respect of time of deadline : 1/1
movie posted the 26 november..
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style : 3/3
it's not banal at all! you create a new style, i very like this, it's clean and fluid... <3
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endurance / agressivity : 2/3
you still agressiv, until the end.. very respect
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technique : 2/2
you have nice tricks, nice wheels and spin, but it's already see in other ALJL jumpers
TOTAL : 17/20
OMG ! this movie is very better than 1/16 o_o you are almost perfect for ALJL's criteria o_o
you understand what a league ask to jumpers... what else? you deserve your fame in jumpstyle's world =)
If you want MORE :
- try to be more original in the edit of your movie ( little story ( love, friend etc.. )
- maybe time to learn spin?
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09 - Aldriic vs Benny aka
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rythme ( beat ) : 2/3
you are on beat for your tricks, basic but try to play with the music
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variéty : 2,5/3
you have lot of tricks, you almost don't repeat tricks and you jump 24seconds, but you use lot of differents tricks
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originality : 2/2
you have nice intro, effects and.. 1/16 and 1/8 are ONE story, true? very original, continu like this
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balance : 2/3
you don't fall, and you use hard tricks who need balance sometimes
BUT you almost fall at your kick ( 1,23 ) so.. -1
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respect of time of deadline : 1/1
movie posted the 30 november..
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style : 3/3
it's not banal, it's clean and fluid, maybe a new style
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endurance / agressivity : 2,5/3
you still agressiv, until the end.. nice man
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technique : 2/2
you have nice tricks, nice wheels and your own tricks ( 1,15 - 1,30 etc.. )
TOTAL : 17/20
Very nice man! One part, i like your little story, it's the first time that i see this in a league
And you have your own style, you don't copy other jumpers, you are clean.. very nice, continu like this!
You can increase your jumpstyle's level, if you have 17/20, it's because you have 2/2 in originality, so..
try to get 17 only with jumpstyle
If you want MORE :
- take more risk with balance without fall
- maybe time to learn spin?
- play with music
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09 - Benny aka VS Aldriic
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rythme ( beat ) : 2/3
you are on beat for your tricks, very nice
but you try to play with the music sometimes ( like 0,45 ) and you fail =/
( if you success this combo, it can be cool )
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variéty : 2/3
you have lot of tricks, you almost don't repeat tricks, it's good ^^
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originality : 1/2
you have effect..
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balance : 2/3
you don't fall, but you don't take risk
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respect of time of deadline : 1/1
movie posted the 02 december..
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style : 2/3
it's banal, i see lot of russian jumpers in your jumpstyle... try to be different ^^
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endurance / agressivity : 1/3
you are agressiv at begin.. but you lost in at the middle =/ train your cardio ^^
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technique : 1/2
you have nice tricks, and nice basics, but it's not enough, try harder tricks for have more ^^
TOTAL : 12/20
this is nice, i like see this movie, really
but try to train your agressivity, your style and the tricks at 0,45 <3
If you want MORE :
- try to be more original in the edit of your movie
- get better tricks and harder tricks
- try to be constant in your endurance when you jump
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10 - Splyke vs BL4Z3R
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rythme ( beat ) : 2/3
you are on beat for your tricks but try to play with the music
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variéty : 2/3
you have lot of tricks, but try to repeat less your tricks ^^
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originality : 0/2
you havent' intro, effect, nothing =/
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balance : 2/3
you don't fall, but you don't use tricks who very need balance
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respect of time of deadline : 1/1
movie posted the 04 december..
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style : 2/3
it's not banal, but it's like russian jumpstyle.. try to get your tricks, and your style
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endurance / agressivity : 2/3
you still agressiv, until the end.. nice man
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technique : 1/2
you have nice tricks, nice wheels but try to get your own sticks
TOTAL : 12/20
Nice, you are very clean and fluid
but it's already see.. try to get your own style, play with music.. etc for have more
If you want MORE :
- take more risk with balance without fall
- get your own style
- play with music
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BL4Z3R - NO MOVIE / Disqualified
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he'en vs r3volution
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rythme ( beat ) : 2/3
you are on beat for your tricks and you play with the music
but you finish efore the music at the end =/
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variéty : 3/3
you have lot of tricks, you don't repeat your combos/tricks.. very nice!
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originality : 1/2
you havent' intro, effect,
but you add "ownstyle" and "tekstyle", and your little logo pokemon is funny
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balance : 2/3
you don't fall, and you use only one tricks need balance ( 0,43, Mickael Jackson power! XD )
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respect of time of deadline : 1/1
movie posted the 04 december..
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style : 3/3
it's not banal, you have your own style mix tekstyle and ownstyle is nice even if you are not clean for all
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endurance / agressivity : 1,5/3
you are agressiv for some tricks, but not all
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technique : 2/2
you have nice tricks, ownstyle and tekstyle nice idea
TOTAL : 15,5/20
I... don't understand "revolution, good luck for your surgery" ? and your titel.. it's r3voluTION, not ITON ^^'
and try to shut your mouth when you say : 'i lose because judges are friend...etc"
my goal is not to suck my friends, every judges in EVERY leagues have friends, no? -_-'
it's very childish to say this, and very very stupid to say this BEFORE results..
For the jump, it's good, just be more clean in your jump, you aren't fluid at all
Continu to be original like this, you have your style
If you want MORE :
- take more risk with balance
- be more clean and fluid
- don't insults league of judges -_-' it's stupid
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R3volution : NO MOVIE / DIsqualified
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12 - Energy'zMusic VS Kip
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rythme ( beat ) : 2/3
you are on beat for your tricks but you don't play with the music :s
but you finish before the music at the end =/
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variéty : 1/3
you have some tricks, but not enough for have 2/3
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originality : 1/2
you have an intro, effect
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balance : 2/3
you don't fall, look your arms.. it's not easy for you?
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respect of time of deadline : 1/1
movie posted the 04 december..
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style : 1/3
it's banal, try to get your own style
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endurance / agressivity : 1/3
you are not agressiv globaly, only for some tricks maybe =/
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technique : 1/2
you have nice tricks, but try to learn advanced tricks ^^
TOTAL : 10/20
Not bad, i like this, continu to train for become better
If you want MORE :
- try to use your arms, they must be a part of you
- learn better tricks and harder tricks ^^
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Kip vs Energy'zMusic
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rythme ( beat ) : 2/3
you are on beat for your tricks but you don't play with the music :s
and the music finish before you at the end ^^'
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variéty : 3/3
very nice lot of tricks, don't repeat them.. very nice
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originality : 1/2
you have an intro
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balance : 2/3
you don't fall, but you don't take risk
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respect of time of deadline : 1/1
movie posted the 04 december..
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style : 2,5/3
it's not banal, but it's not amazing.. no in the middle : 2,5/3
try to have one special tricks from you, *_*
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endurance / agressivity : 3/3
you are agressiv until the end, very cool :p
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technique : 1/2
you have nice tricks, but it's globaly basic.. try to get 2 or 3 special tricks
TOTAL : 15,5/20
Not bad at all! very nice, it's very better than 1/16, you show a good level
you haven't a own style, but you can get it :p
If you want MORE :
- get better camera.. because your quality sucks ^^' lol
- learn one or 2 amazing tricks for get your own style
try to be different that other famous jumpers
- time to learn spin?
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13 - Kaay.Ke vs Massiver
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rythme ( beat ) : 3/3
you are on beat for your tricks and you play with the music ( 1:03 to 1:07 ) good job
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variéty : 2/3
you have lot of tricks, you almost don't repeat them.
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originality : 1/2
you have an intro =)
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balance : 2/3
you don't fall, but you don't take risk
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respect of time of deadline : 1/1
movie posted the 27 november..
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style : 2/3
it's not banal, but it's not a new style.. get special tricks ( like your slide at 1:02 )
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endurance / agressivity : 1,5/3
you are in the middle.. not agressiv, but not soft..
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technique : 2/2
you have nice tricks, and special trick like the slide 1:02
TOTAL : 14,5/20
Hey nice man i like this movie, you deserve this rate
If you want MORE :
- learn one or 2 amazing tricks for get your own style
- time to learn spin?
- be more original in your movie
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Massiver : NO MOVIE / Disqualified
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14 - Free vs VictorH
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rythme ( beat ) : 2/3
you are on beat for your tricks but you don't play with the music =/
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variéty : 2/3
you have some tricks, but try to do most ^^
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originality : 1/2
you have a intro
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balance : 2/3
you don't fall, but you don't take risk =/
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respect of time of deadline : 1/1
movie posted the 28 november..
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style : 2/3
it's good but it's not a new style, try to get this with your own tricks
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endurance / agressivity : 2/3
nice, you are globaly agressiv, try to be until the end ^^
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technique : 1/2
you have nice tricks, but maybe need harder tricks to do
TOTAL : 13/20
Nice man, i like your movie, just try to get your style and please?? change this view o_o
If you want MORE :
- change the view when you jump, judge can't really see your moves
- be more original in your movie
- play with music
- get harder tricks
- get your own style
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VictorH vs Free
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rythme ( beat ) : 2/3
you are on beat for your tricks but you don't play with the music =/
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variéty : 3/3
you have lot of tricks, you don't repeat them.
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originality : 1/2
you have no intro, no effect, nothing
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balance : 2/3
you don't fall, but you don't take risk =/
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respect of time of deadline : 1/1
movie posted the 04 december..
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style : 3/3
it's good you have your own style, i really like this, your tricks, your style
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endurance / agressivity : 2/3
it's clean, but i don't see agressivity.. maybe youtube's bug.. your movie looks like slowed
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technique : 2/2
you have nice tricks, and hard tricks that other don't do good
TOTAL : 16/20
Very nice man!
I really like your style, it's always nice to see this! Amazing really!
If you want MORE :
- time to learn spin?
- be more original in your movie
- play with music
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15 - Focus vs NazZziK
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rythme ( beat ) : 2/3
you are on beat for your tricks but you don't play at all with the music =/
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variéty : 3/3
you have a lot of tricks, very nice <3
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originality : 1/2
you have a nice intro, but your house.. i very like 1/16 because of club, but here.. =/
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balance : 2,5/3
you don't fall, but you don't take risk =/ ( only the tricks at begin, but it's not enough for give you 3/3 )
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respect of time of deadline : 1/1
movie posted the 04 december..
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style : 3/3
it's good you have a god style, your style
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endurance / agressivity : 2,5/3
nice, you are globaly agressiv
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technique : 2/2
you have nice tricks, and nice begin.. continu
TOTAL : 17/20
Nice man, you are.. one amazing jumper in this league o_o
even if i don't like the place and the music, your jump is so amazing that i can't stop to watch this
If you want MORE :
- jump out of house ^^'
- be more original in your movie
- play with music
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15 - NazZziK vs Focus
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rythme ( beat ) : 3/3
you are on beat for your tricks and you play with the music ( 1:00 ) etc..
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variéty : 2,5/3
you have LOT of tricks, but the trap with long session is that sometimes, you repeat tricks :s
but it's not really important, you deserve point for risk
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originality : 1/2
you have an intro, nice
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balance : 2/3
you don't fall, but you don't take risk =/
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respect of time of deadline : 1/1
movie posted the 03 december..
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style : 2/3
it's good but it's not a new style, when i see your movie, i guess that you are russian? =/
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endurance / agressivity : 2/3
nice, you are globaly agressiv, try to be until the end ^^
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technique : 1/2
you have nice tricks, but maybe need harder tricks to do
TOTAL : 14,5/20
Nice man, it's good, but try to lost the russian style, don't be a similar copy of famous jumpers =/
you have nice tricks that i don't see in ALJL jumpers, try to do something with this
If you want MORE :
- be more original in your movie
- get your own style
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16 - nutcase vs gracee
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rythme ( beat ) : 2/3
you are in beat, but you don't use the music =/
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variéty : 2/3
some tricks, but not enough for get more :s
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originality : 1/2
one intro ( but try to get better if you pass.. --' )
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balance : 1,5/3
you don't fall, but at your spin in the end, you almost? ^^'
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respect of time of deadline : 1/1
movie posted the 04 december..
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style : 2/3
it's not a new style, but i never saw this i think, try to get better skills for get a own style
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endurance / agressivity : 2/3
nice agressivity, continu
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technique : 1/2
nice tricks, but it's basic, learn more tricks and better tricks ^^
TOTAL : 12/20
it's nice globaly
even if gracee don't post a movie, you still have a nice rate for unknow jumper ( 12/20 )
continu like this for 1/8 final
If you want MORE :
- get harder tricks
- try to be more fluid
- play with music
- be more original in your clip
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Gracee : NO MOVIE / Disqualified
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